Hey, Lament beta readers?

[annathepiper]

I haven’t heard anything out of anyone besides eveshka, so if any of you all have anything to say to me about the novel, do please let me know tonight if possible. If you don’t have anything you think is a shipstopper, I want to get the thing sent off to Ms. Fox tomorrow!

Thanks again for all your help, folks. It is very, very much appreciated!

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Comments

[technoshaman]

Other than the typoes which you said eveshka caught alreddie, I haven't see anything; I managed to get about half way before the on-call monster nommed my time.... This is not quite as gripping as the second half of QoS but it's *consistently* good. Haven't come up with anything plotwise or phrasewise to really call out as being off your game...

Break a pencil lead! :)

[annathepiper]

Awesome, thanks for checking in. :)

And heh, if you only made it about halfway through you haven't gotten to the bigger splodies at the end. Of course, this is only Book 1 of a three-book story, so the biggest splodies don't happen until Book 3!

Glad to hear it's working for you overall though!